Monday, April 13, 2015

Poem that arose from an assignment in the Journey Journal

When Inside Wants Out


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0:03 With a tendency to express many emotions by reflecting on love
some type of addiction, wave, or an escape of my humanity.

Conditioning is one of the many laws of life.
As I am the last of four, sharing thoughts with myself was normal;

looking at the world around me, understanding, reasoning at young.


0:33 It’s an ultimate expression of (my) humanity.
Times never had; basically me and my imagination.

It’s all that pent up anger about the lack of courage; is conditioning.


0:49 I guess it is just a means to an end.
Thoughts can be powerful. Express good love;

as a child I was ignorant, and innocent with love.


To share smiles, a “free hugs” movement, or “free love.”
It gets me sad; sad was always happy for deep people.

Maybe we are just that, sad, but knowing happy we choose the latter.


1:24 Express of good love, a kind of warmth, like a kiss maybe.
A good glass of tipsy wine with family.

A state at which one feels perfection, philosophy and love-ophy.

This is a way to express the peace within,
when inside wants out.

6 comments:

  1. Hey! I just have to say that this line was very interesting for me: "Maybe we are just that, sad, but knowing happy we choose the latter."

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  3. I can totally relate with "Sad is happy for deep people". Not that I consider myself a deep person, but it feels that way to me.

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  4. Great poem, really deep. I really liked the final part about love and family.

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  5. If sad is happy for deep people, is it alright that pain is love for them too? If so, i can relate....sort of.

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  6. Hello Nicolas! This is really deep poem... the last phrase 'This is a way to express peace within, when inside wants out' is especially moving. Kudos on your poem!
    ~~~Paula

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